Great job with your pitch. You maintained good eye contact throughout and avoided the distracting “ums” that most people use when speaking to a crowd. Additionally, you did not appear to be nervous and you seemed to know the material that you were speaking about quite well, which would definitely be helpful if you were trying to convince others to invest in your venture. Overall, I thought that it was very good.
Hey Dylan, I thought your presentation and formality was really awesome. You seem very comfortable on camera and seem like you're very interested in your pitch. The only thing I would critique is speaking with more annunciation. I thought it was a little hard to understand what you were saying but other than that great job.
Hi Dylan,
ReplyDeleteGreat job with your pitch. You maintained good eye contact throughout and avoided the distracting “ums” that most people use when speaking to a crowd. Additionally, you did not appear to be nervous and you seemed to know the material that you were speaking about quite well, which would definitely be helpful if you were trying to convince others to invest in your venture. Overall, I thought that it was very good.
Hey Dylan,
ReplyDeleteI thought your presentation and formality was really awesome. You seem very comfortable on camera and seem like you're very interested in your pitch. The only thing I would critique is speaking with more annunciation. I thought it was a little hard to understand what you were saying but other than that great job.